I looked back at that sketch from yesterday and thought - where's the caricature? and more importantly where's the character? So I used that as reference to have another go, aiming for a more lively picture with some exaggeration this time:
It's WAY better, don't you think? I may well have a go at that one with a real paintbrush. Funny how one day you can do something that you think is OK but is actually rubbish, then do something decent the next day. Hmph.